After that meeting we have rethought the story and we all put our heads togeather to change it. Here are the changes that we have made.


0-6 sec. Establishing shot outside of Farmhouse.
6-24sec. We are then introduced to our chicken character. He looks aroundthe farmhouse
seeing other chickens laying eggs. We have shots of the various farmhouse machinery
taking eggs away emphasizing the fact other chickens are laying eggs.
24-34sec. Our chicken’s 1st attempt at laying an egg. He will;-Stretches muscles (limbers up)-
Strains (to lay egg) No success!-Becomes a little anxious now.
34-39sec. He looks up at a veteran chicken who points to a sign that reads. Chicken - eggs =
roast dinner
39-48sec. Our chicken becomes more worried and nervous.-show him thinking about what he’s
gonna do.Maybe rubbing his chin, eyes darting left & right.
48- 120sec. He then thinks of an elaborate plan. He sees a vulnerable egg, with a halo of light
over it.-Goes behind the haystack and jumps back out wearingSplintercell -type
gear.-Steals egg but looses it on the way back-Jumps around in frustration
(10 secs).
120- 132sec.Goes into quick cuts of him trying different things in an attemptto lay an egg.1.
Pushing a broom down his throat2. Taking laxative.3. Use a machine to suck the
egg out.
132- 150sec. Final Stage -Becomes more and more desperate.-Begins straining really hard.-
Goes into a series of close up cuts on the chicken, musclesbulging, eyes watering,
vies on his neck etc….-Finally his wattle and cox’s comb pops up and he realises
thenhes’s actually cockerel.-Other chickens give him a surprised look, and then
start eyeinghim up seductively.-Our character now a cockerel turns his head to the
camera andraises his eyebrows and smiles.Fades to credits, showing pictures of the
chicken with the other hens enjoying himself (being pampered)