Meeting with Mike

Our group had a meeting with mike to explain to him our story so far and see what he thought. We showed him my sketches of the opening sceens and explained to him the rest of the story. After a bit of a discusshion with him he explained to us that it is extreemly important for the viwers to be introduced to the character stright away. Also that the suspence should be built from the beginging as that would enable the audience to emote with the main character stright away.

So after that talk with mike we had a group meeting. We took input from everyone and we decided that it would be best to cut the first sceen out as it wasnt really nessecery for telling the story and adding susspence. We then brain stormed to decide how the film should start.

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